After all what do you want to say?

• Each slide has a headline. But I do not have any message on what I am trying to communicate. The heading is a representation of "what you are writing about", that is, the type of message. A message is the "content of thought to tell" itself. Headlines are also important, but the message is really important.

• If you look carefully, there are some places like messages in some places. But there are no clear conclusions messages as to which messages are scattered, eventually what they want to say. Or, the conclusion message ends with common general theory and abstract theory, such as "we need further marketing efforts".

There is information, but there is no message, there is no concrete conclusion, after all it is a slide you do not know what you want to say. It is the type that I see the most.